A great poem by Amanda Eifert

Good Morning! I’m sharing a new piece of poetry. It hasn’t been published on my blog until now. Spillwords Press graciously published another one of my poems. Check them out at http://www.spillwords.com to publish some your best poetry and other writing. Here’s today’s poem: You Can’t Take the Pain Away. ——- ——– © Mandibelle16. (2017) All […]

via Published Poetry – Spillwords: Free Verse – ” You Can’t Take The Pain Away” #amwriting #poetry #spillwords — Mandibelle16

#Inspired by her words

The pain can’t go away

It’s there to stay

Know it’s there for a reason

The wound caused

Will heal with time

The scar created

It’s there to stay

For a good reason

The pain and scar are symbols of our struggles

They become our stories

They become inspirations

They are the foundations of a beautiful future

Don’t fight to eliminate the pain

Don’t grieve if the wound is too big to heal

Rest, be calm, have peace

Save your energy, protect your sanity

Give time permission to fight for you

And be amazed at the wonders it will offer you

Categories Poetry, Thoughts

5 thoughts on “A great poem by Amanda Eifert

  1. Reblogged this on Mandibelle16 and commented:
    This really touched me. Made me cry, a response to my spillwords poem. Exactly the right words. Read Caroline’s wonderful poem!


    1. Your welcome Amanda, it is my pleasure.
      My poem is basically the message I got from your poem. Take it as a voice in your voice, elaborating the same message.

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  2. Carolïne, thank you very much for sharing my poetry. I really appreciate it. Most of all I really appreciate your poetic response. It made me cry. You said the right words, the words I needed to hear here and now and I thank you for that. I’m really touched. 🙏💕


  3. A beautiful poem, Carol! And I’m an avid reader of Mandi’s writing, so it’s always nice to see others like her work too ^_^


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